202407-Kenyon-f2f.md

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 ## July 16-18
 ## Kenyon College
 
-This meeting will focus exclusively on post-O4 development plans.  The existing simplified calibration model is showing cracks as the instruments continue to evolve, and will likely be insufficient for the increased power levels in O5.  We should assume that we will need to make major changes to the model and the online pipeline to maintain a good calibration, and we should start prepping for that now.
+This meeting will focus exclusively on post-O4 development plans.  The existing simplified calibration model is showing strain as the instruments continue to evolve, and will likely be insufficient for the expected increased power levels in O5.  We should assume that we will need to make major changes to the model and the online pipeline to maintain a good calibration, and we should start prepping for that now.
 
 Topics to be covered:
 * improving the model for O5
 * improving the error and uncertainty estimates
-* integrating a new model into the pipeline
+* integrating new models into the pipeline
 * simplifying the pipeline
 * simplifying the calibration procedure