Online Pipelines editorial comments
Editorial comments on "Online Pipelines" in procedures/searches.html#
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Four CBC pipelines introduced in alphabetical order but individual pipeline paragraphs are not. -
"which cause large SNR" -> "that cause large SNR" -
"A coincident analysis is performed by GSTLAL, PyCBC Live, and MBTAOnline" -> "A coincident analysis is performed by all pipelines" -
"at each detector" -> "from each detector" -
mixed plurality in "SPIIR extract candidates of each detector via matched-filtering and look for coherent responses in other detectors so that a localization of the source can be constructed." Consider: "SPIIR extracts candidates from each detector via matched-filtering and looks for coherent responses from the other detectors to provide source localization." -
"detector bandwidth" -> "detectors bandwidth" -
SPIIR: "and find coherent" -> "and finds coherent" -
SPIIR: Simplify/clarify "It constructs background by time-shifting detector data one hundred times over a week to form a background statistic distribution used to evaluate foreground candidate significance." with "It constructs a background statistical distribution by time-shifting detector data one hundred times over a week to evaluate foreground candidate significance." -
cWB: drop "-like" from first sentence. It has detected actual GW signals. -
cWB: "pixels which" -> "pixels that" -
cWB: "The last one" The last one what? Perhaps "The largest likelihood value"? -
oLIB: Clarify if the "10 ms" is the same LIGO light travel time between detectors mentioned above for PyCBC -
Indicate which of the GW triggered pipelines (hopefully all?) will be treating the H-L-V network in a symmetric fashion versus an initial H-L stage followed by checking V. -
RAVEN: Is there a public link to Alex's thesis (or other RAVEN documentation)? -
RAVEN: "Rapid On-Source VOEvent Coincidence Monitor" capitalization leads to the acronym "ROSVOECM" not "RAVEN"
Edited by Leo P. Singer